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@@ -117,9 +117,9 @@ asks the same first -- `Dump` writes `pardes-<date>-<time>.zon` (UTC) in
 and logs `dump <path>`, and `Restore` with no path takes the last one; a
 Restore puts a new editor under every client, so the write of it is
 answered and then every connection is hung up, their fids naming the old
-editor's panes (through a 9ns mount the write usually fails with
-ECONNRESET all the same: 9ns fails a request whose reply is already in once
-the hang-up breaks its next send, so trust the log): dial again, and the new
+editor's panes (a 9ns older than cloud9 2a7137c could fail the write with
+ECONNRESET all the same, when another request's send met the hang-up
+before the answer was read; the log is the authority): dial again, and the new
 log names the restored panes and
 `restore <path>`. The answer has 200 ms to leave before the cut, so a slow
 client may see only the cut; the log's `restore <path>` is what says the